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<p><span style="text-align: justify;">在當(dāng)今競爭激烈的碩士申請中，一篇出色的文書可以讓申請者脫穎而出。文書是展示</span><strong style="text-align: justify;">個人故事和潛力</strong><span style="text-align: justify;">的窗口，它能夠向招生官傳達(dá)獨(dú)特性和動力。無論申請中背景如何，有效的文書寫作都可以</span><strong style="text-align: justify;">提升申請成功率</strong><span style="text-align: justify;">。</span></p> <div data-page-id="J2YZdkQXvobYQHxBaZ0czlcvntd" data-docx-has-block-data="true"> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IJWFdtseioYdTkxIc28ck6QRnEg" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IJWFdtseioYdTkxIc28ck6QRnEg" style="text-align: justify;">因此，為了提供一些文書寫作思路，我將深入分析一篇學(xué)生碩士申請文書，并分享有關(guān)撰寫出色文書的指導(dǎo)和策略。希望這些寫作的啟示將為接下來的申請者提供寶貴的指引，為碩士申請?jiān)鎏沓晒Φ囊还P！</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IJWFdtseioYdTkxIc28ck6QRnEg" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <h1 class="heading-1 ace-line old-record-id-FIqSdmASmomKIoxcjy5cWXb8nnf" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>本科背景</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe" style="text-align: justify;"> <div id="item_1712041052681" class="znz-autocompleter-item znz-autocompleter-student type-1" contenteditable="false" data-item-data="{"id_cust":284672,"name_cust":"sunyudi","cname_cust":"孫宇頔","univ_cust":"河海大學(xué)","major_cust":"英語","eng_cust":"雅思:6.5(L:6.5/R:8/W:6.5/S:5.5)","gpa_cust":"86.99","apply":"67114","college_id":739,"name":"S同學(xué)","url":"http://identitytheftpreventionsite.com/college_739","applys":[{"cname_univ_aply":"香港城市大學(xué)","major_cname":"語言研究文學(xué)碩士","sub_aply":"2022-11-19","offer_aply":"2022-12-20","id":1876,"push_research_time":"0000-00-00","result_aply":"錄取","url":"http://identitytheftpreventionsite.com/majr_1876"}],"exprience":"<div class=\"exprience-wrapper\">\n <div class=\"title\">\n 主要經(jīng)歷\n </div>\n <div class=\"detail-wrapper\">\n <div class=\"operate-wrapper\">\n <div class=\"add\">&nbsp;</div>\n \n </div>\n \n <div class=\"exprience-item\">\n <div class=\"label\" contenteditable=\"false\">科研經(jīng)歷：</div>\n <div class=\"value\" contenteditable=\"false\"><div data-page-id=\"J2YZdkQXvobYQHxBaZ0czlcvntd\" data-docx-has-block-data=\"false\"><div class=\" old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe\">課程論文</div></div></div> \n <div class=\"operate-wrapper\">\n <div class=\"delete\">&nbsp;</div>\n </div> \n </div>\n <div class=\"exprience-item\">\n <div class=\"label\" contenteditable=\"false\">實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷：</div>\n <div class=\"value\" contenteditable=\"false\"><div data-page-id=\"J2YZdkQXvobYQHxBaZ0czlcvntd\" data-docx-has-block-data=\"false\"><div class=\" old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe\">教育實(shí)習(xí)</div></div></div> \n <div class=\"operate-wrapper\">\n <div class=\"delete\">&nbsp;</div>\n </div> \n </div>\n \n </div>\n </div>"}" data-item-type="6"> <div class="znz-autocompleter-content"> <div class="header"> <div class="text">學(xué)員背景</div> </div> <div class="main-card"> <div class="name-wrapper"><img class="decorate-left" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/pc/img/article/detail/student-card-title.png" /> <div class="name" contenteditable="false">S同學(xué)</div> <img class="decorate-right" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/pc/img/article/detail/student-card-title.png" /></div> <div class="college-wrapper"> <div class="title">本科背景</div> <div class="detail-wrapper"> <div class="basic"><a class="college link" href="http://identitytheftpreventionsite.com/college_739" target="_blank" rel="noopener">河海大學(xué)</a> <div class="major">英語</div> </div> <div class="score"> <div class="score-item"> <div class="label">GPA：</div> <div class="value">86.99</div> </div> <div class="score-item"> <div class="label">語言成績：</div> <div class="value lang-edit" contenteditable="false">雅思:6.5(L:6.5/R:8/W:6.5/S:5.5)</div> </div> </div> </div> </div> <div class="apply-wrapper"> <div class="title">錄取院校</div> <div class="detail-wrapper"> <div class="apply-item"><a class="college link" href="http://identitytheftpreventionsite.com/majr_1876" target="_blank" rel="noopener">香港城市大學(xué)語言研究文學(xué)碩士</a> <div class="time-wrapper"> <div class="time-item"> <div class="label">申請時(shí)間：</div> <div class="value">2022-11-19</div> </div> <div class="time-item"> <div class="label">錄取時(shí)間：</div> <div class="value">2022-12-20</div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> <div class="exprience-wrapper"> <div class="title">主要經(jīng)歷</div> <div class="detail-wrapper"> <div class="operate-wrapper"> <div class="add"> </div> </div> <div class="exprience-item"> <div class="label" contenteditable="false">科研經(jīng)歷：</div> <div class="value" contenteditable="false"> <div data-page-id="J2YZdkQXvobYQHxBaZ0czlcvntd" data-docx-has-block-data="false"> <div class=" old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe">課程論文</div> </div> </div> <div class="operate-wrapper"> <div class="delete"> </div> </div> </div> <div class="exprience-item"> <div class="label" contenteditable="false">實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷：</div> <div class="value" contenteditable="false"> <div data-page-id="J2YZdkQXvobYQHxBaZ0czlcvntd" data-docx-has-block-data="false"> <div class=" old-record-id-Tg2GdiYEio8wyCxaGklc44N6nXe">教育實(shí)習(xí)</div> </div> </div> <div class="operate-wrapper"> <div class="delete"> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> <span class="znz-autocompleter-operate"> <span class="link-operate"> <span class="toggle">   </span> </span> <span class="card-operate active"> <span class="edit">   </span> <span class="content">   </span> </span> </span></div> <p> </p> </div> <h1 class="heading-1 ace-line old-record-id-RQeGdck48o0OKkxm2Y8c6MLtnff" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>文書解析</strong></span></h1> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OkCuduprwoLUbcxuBPXckFgbnAc" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SCO2d4Oaeoik46xEjbucZthpn2c" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">孫同學(xué)的本科英語專業(yè)申請語言方向，看似與目標(biāo)學(xué)術(shù)領(lǐng)域高度相關(guān)，因此申請難度相對較低。</span><span style="color: #262626;">然而，孫同學(xué)自身的GPA并不高，科研經(jīng)歷主要以課程論文為主，其含金量相對較低，且僅有一個月的學(xué)校實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SCO2d4Oaeoik46xEjbucZthpn2c" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SCO2d4Oaeoik46xEjbucZthpn2c" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">面對這樣的情況，如何突出他的軟實(shí)力，挖掘他經(jīng)歷中的亮點(diǎn)，變得尤為重要。為了增加申請成功率，我對其文書有了如下幾個規(guī)劃。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SnP9dhsYgo19nzxGNx0cTVdFnUf" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <h2 class="heading-2 ace-line old-record-id-PWIGdSo0woMQwIxOqIscpmLennc" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>興趣起源：</strong></span></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-GxzUdWFryoAYY9xyoBBcvnmMnWf" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <h4 class="heading-4 ace-line old-record-id-BjwEdKuudoXqUlxz3h5cGtjOnff" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">強(qiáng)調(diào)興趣和熱情：從現(xiàn)代技術(shù)翻譯角度出發(fā)，強(qiáng)調(diào)他對計(jì)算機(jī)輔助翻譯技術(shù)的思考，以及這一技術(shù)對語言領(lǐng)域的影響，展示他對當(dāng)代社會發(fā)展的敏銳觀察力和對語言學(xué)領(lǐng)域的熱情。</span></h4> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-MuHNd5LAsotJCRxWZ63c5gwbn0b" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-GU2gdKu0yoaOyaxcnCJcc7DFnQh" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #262626;">近幾年翻譯技術(shù)的發(fā)展以及ChatGPT的出現(xiàn)，人工智能對語言領(lǐng)域的影響確實(shí)引發(fā)這一領(lǐng)域的思考。作為一名英專生，對計(jì)算機(jī)輔助翻譯技術(shù)的思考可以體現(xiàn)同學(xué)對當(dāng)代社會發(fā)展和語言領(lǐng)域的洞察力。因此，我決定從技術(shù)與語言這一角度入手來進(jìn)行孫同學(xué)興趣起源的寫作。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UbLvdH6C5o5q4VxarDhcThXjnkF" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <h2 class="heading-2 ace-line old-record-id-AkOwdAssoo4cOwxqGZkc0pwynY2" style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>職業(yè)規(guī)劃：</strong></span></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-RtPydVm2RoudmkxlQCgcGCswnTg" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HwOwdg0gMoQqGWxeilscbQpwnRf" style="text-align: justify;">個人的職業(yè)規(guī)劃與興趣起源是密不可分的，為了讓<span style="color: #262626;"><strong>文書有一條完整的storyline、更具有可閱讀性</strong></span>，我詳細(xì)描述了孫同學(xué)希望繼續(xù)讀博的研究方向，即繼續(xù)研究現(xiàn)代技術(shù)對翻譯技術(shù)的影響，以及探索現(xiàn)代技術(shù)是否將會替代人工翻譯。<span style="color: #262626;"><strong>詳細(xì)闡述自己的研究興趣</strong></span>不僅可以讓招生官看到申請者想要有更高學(xué)術(shù)追求的決心，還會使文書更具真實(shí)性和獨(dú)特性。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZVpjdyEwnojME7xZoQec82vuneb" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-QVNqdAJQ2oaws2xX3BocgsTkncb" data-type="image" 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old-record-id-RGcBdSUWBoH1OmxBIafciAmYn6g" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Wbx9d4J11oU3vCxSz1YcFb8MnNd" style="text-align: justify;">孫同學(xué)給到的本科時(shí)期的經(jīng)歷是關(guān)于新冠語境下中國主流媒體外宣翻譯用語特點(diǎn)及宣傳策略研究。在研究過程中，他主要負(fù)責(zé)的是資料收集，和資料排版的工作。那么如何來突出他的能力呢？大量的數(shù)據(jù)整理和搜集過程是他遇到的第一個挑戰(zhàn)。因此我運(yùn)用了較多的篇幅來寫他通過各種渠道搜集資料梳理資料，然后通過對比分析完成了該任務(wù)。在我看來，<span style="color: #262626;"><strong>申請 ”language Studies“這類偏理論研究的課程，數(shù)據(jù)搜集，處理，以及分析能力是必不可少</strong></span>的，也是提高學(xué)生競爭力的有效方式。</div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-IK0WdI4iuoQPIWx4ezOcNa46nr5" style="text-align: justify;" data-type="image" 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old-record-id-FL7Kd6GB8oDsxFxm3Gicy1nNnoh" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AiHydNdOioTptPxyBYbcWWxHn2f" style="text-align: justify;"><strong>如何將英語教育的實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷與語言學(xué)掛鉤？</strong>這是我在撰寫實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷時(shí)思考的重要問題。語言學(xué)的核心在于探究語言內(nèi)部的規(guī)律。因此，我將一個值得關(guān)注的教育現(xiàn)象--學(xué)校僅注重教授應(yīng)試教育的知識，卻忽視了學(xué)生的語言學(xué)習(xí)需求寫進(jìn)文書中。并提出了一個觀點(diǎn)，即通過學(xué)習(xí)語言學(xué)知識，學(xué)生能夠了解語言的普遍規(guī)律，并在學(xué)習(xí)過程中具備應(yīng)對不同困難的能力。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-JhE9dOClxoig23xj8aTcSEaXnkc" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-WtVhdcuJ0oR8ZnxQ4VHcLKATnFc" style="text-align: justify;">在文書中提到申請者在教學(xué)中引入一些<strong>基本的語言學(xué)概念</strong>，例如語言結(jié)構(gòu)、語音規(guī)律和詞匯形成原理等，以幫助學(xué)生更好地理解和掌握語言。此外，還提出了一些實(shí)踐性的建議，如通過討論語言變化和語言習(xí)得的理論，激發(fā)學(xué)生對語言學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，以及鼓勵他們在寫作和口語表達(dá)中運(yùn)用所學(xué)的語言學(xué)知識。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-D8CbdXSFHokRrKxpVmXc3Vninue" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-YiRqd5ySSoS2tdxppZKckCQwn9c" style="text-align: justify;">通過將實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷與語言學(xué)知識的關(guān)聯(lián)進(jìn)行思考和論述，文書可以突出申請者的專業(yè)性知識和對教育改革的獨(dú)特觀點(diǎn)，展示其在英語教育領(lǐng)域的潛力和熱情。</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BPGCd4PExoHysUxP4fAcqfaNnBh" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <h2 class="heading-4 ace-line old-record-id-LA0cdOioYo0GgCxoNQHcpavpnFc" style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">Why school 和職業(yè)規(guī)劃</span></strong></h2> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSNWdg0zNoGIsUxsdiccPDA4njh" style="text-align: justify;"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OcmKd4SQ8oM2qQxCuzBcnL4wnlg" style="text-align: justify;">有了實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷的鋪墊，why school的出現(xiàn)就十分合理了----因?yàn)榘l(fā)現(xiàn)大多數(shù)學(xué)校教師不會在教英語的過程中補(bǔ)充語言學(xué)知識，所以希望在碩士階段學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)知識，從而在未來改變這一現(xiàn)象。</div> <div 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